If the visuals of a DMT trip were your inspiration then I commend you on your work, however, the only things I think it would need is more vibrancy in the color department, more going on in the brown empty space since DMT trips are in no way simplistic. I also think the shapes should pop out a little more. I remember my first breakthrough and how vivid and completely overpowering the visuals were. I think you have an excellent base design, but if true DMT visuals are your goal then the extra ten steps must be taken to ensue the dumbfounded effect on your audience.
fan of so many different genres its unbelievable..people that only listen to one type of music are outright brainwashing themselves. listening to Dick Dale and his Deltones - miserlou while writing this that guitar playing.....hya! hya! HHEEEEEEYYYYAAAAAAAA!!!! i knew i would own this song, one day... the very first time i saw pulp fiction