Critical Mass

This is a very good piece, however, the lack of contrast in vibrancy gives the eyes nowhere to rest and be drawn into the piece.

Each time I look at the piece, my eyes skid across the top, and I find it hard to enter into the pieces detail.

Orange is my favorite color, and I love what you have done with this, but it is almost too much to take because of the lack of entry points.

Despite my apparent disappointment with the piece, I actually do quite enjoy it, and I feel it has a nice sense of movement despite its obviously stationary state.